SkyFalling Railgun [Redrawn]

[UPDATE] I did some tweaking to have Misaka stand out a bit.

After Reading darkspeeds' tutorial about composition, looked at my last drawing of Misaka Mikoto in my Skyfalling Railgun fanart drawing and realize that I can do better than that. So I took my original file strip it down till it was only Misaka with her main colors. Then I added more lineart detail to her uniform (school emblem, sweater colar and arm holes, and skirt. I added knuckle marking to her right hand and redid the background, lighting effect. Then decided to do cel shading shadowing and higlighting and vala here is the final result.

In the Composition Tutorial, mention that the picture must flow to your focal point. Since the focal point was her right arm about to fire her railgun, and her body was at an arch, I decided to use circles as my composition. So the lighting effects wer in a cirlce around the coin to show eleltrical buildup, and the clouds also cirlced around that area. So compared to my original Fanart Drawing fav.me/d62j5yy, this one came out way better. So what are your guys thought about it? Well anyways, I going to get to bed for well needed sleep and you have a wonderful day. ^^

Oh by the way I on my youtube page, I did upload a speedsketch of this. Go ahead and check it out here - youtu.be/r8lvKMpSRTk

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Misaka Mikoto from "A Certian Scientific Railgun" (C) Kazuma Kamachi
Fanart Artwork Created by OdysseyWestra

darkspeeds' Composition Tutorial - fav.me/d62ybyr

Original Drawing - fav.me/d62j5yy
SpeedSketch - youtu.be/r8lvKMpSRTk
Sketch - sta.sh/0122wgcgbxbm <- You'll need a deviantart account to see this in my sta.sh
Original Lineart - sta.sh/01dbbqa42p1h <- You'll need a deviantart account to see this in my sta.sh
New Lineart - sta.sh/01dbbqa42p1h <- You'll need a deviantart account to see this in my sta.sh

Sketch done in pencil
Lineart, Coloring, and Compositing done in MyPaint and GIMP

Time - 6hrs.